A cloudy lesson

Once upon a time there lived a boy and his grandfather.  His grandfather's name was Jacob and his name was Jax.

 Jacob took Jax to the roof of his house to make cloud's. First he took the cloud shaped hoop and set it up on the platform on his roof.


Jacob blew into the magical hoopand a cloud flew through  the other end then Jax tried and when he blew through the hoop one little cloud popped out.

Jax tried again and nothing happened.  He kept on trying but nothing happend so he lent over and broke it he stood up.

Jacob said are you okay and then Jax stood up. Jax looked at the magic circle and it was no longer a circle. Jax tried to strech it back into it's shape but made it worse.

Jax looked through the hoop at a cloud then he made a star and gave it to Jacob. Jacob blew into it and it made a star cloud.

Then he made a rabit and gave it to Jacob. He blew into it and it made a rabit. Jax made a hart and it made a hart cloud.

The catch

Once there lived a little boy and he lived in a village called Taopo and his name was Archie. He had to feed his village and he decided to fish at the small pond. He was waiting there for a tug. Then suddenly he felt a tug and he pulled and pulled then it came out but it was only a small fish.  He through it in the empty basket and sighed then he heard a wail and ran to see. His trap and saw a fox. He pulled out his knife and cut the fox free, then it ran off. The fox ran off behind the basket and then jumped in the basket and stole Archie's fish. The fox ran off under spiky a tree. Archie looked back at his villige and Archie kept on going under the tree over a log up a steep hill and half way up Archie lost his hat. At the top of the hill he saw the fox throw the fish in the water and then the fog cleered away and he saw a massive lake. Then a massive fish jumped up and then the fox came up to Archie with a stick. Archie  broke a twig of and tied his piece of string with a hook on to the stick. He sat down with the fox and put his rod in the water then he walked back with a big and small fish. He gave the small fish to the fox and took the big fish back to his village. 

clock tower writing

Once upon a time there was a girl who was stuck in a clock tower and made the world move.


Her sister called and said "who trapped you in the tower?" and she said "the evil prince".  "I will get him and make him do what you have to do and I will let you free with the world moving". 

I have the evil prince here with cog pants to make the clock turn  around. But his father will come looking for him because he saw me and I herd him send gards looking for me and the prince. What am I going to do because I don't have a house. You will live with me get a gob  and earn some money to have your own house.

My writing goal reflection

I think I have improved on my goal because I check my work when I finish but I don't think I improved in my punctuation because I am just not using it in my work.

My Autumn Leaves